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Black Rain


Another rainy stormy night,
nothing will ever feel the same.
Thunder makes me fear with fright,
Theirs no way to call your name.
To be alone is no delight,
here I am alone with shame.
It runs trough me like day and night,
lonesome here for playing my game.
I wish you where here to hold me real tight.
Forgive me for I am  the only one to blame.

A darken rainy stormy night!
Here I whither away in the BLACK RAIN!
In that selfish moment I did not realize,
all I was doing was causing myself pain.
You took and shook me with a big surprise!
And, showed me that my cheating had nothing to gain.
With you in distance I lose my self,
sitting all alone in the BLACK RAIN.

Please stop the pain, its my love I want to gain.

Tears from me you wouldn't take.
It was my fault to take the fall.
It does not mean my love to you was fake.
Without you I feel real small.
The hurt runs deep~Deeper than a lake!
The hurt runs high~Higher than the tallest wall!
The hurt is heavy~something you can't shake!
The hurt is like a mystery~you can't solve at all! 

How these cloud posses my days,
I have no one to blame
If I knew exactly what to say,
I would not be feeling all this pain.
is here to stay!
I have lost what took long to gain.

please go away!
I want my lover to come back my way.


inspired by:  Rain Rain Go Away.... :)

Copyright © SKAT A

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  1. Date: 3/5/2015 11:46:00 PM
    He Skat!! How's it going?

  1. Date: 2/28/2015 6:40:00 AM
    Skat, this is a deep and emotional poem, an excellent write and congratulations on the win and thanks for visiting my poem Oh Spring . . . .

  1. Date: 7/1/2014 10:43:00 AM
    It's been an honor to read & comment once again on this superb poem and song my dearest Skat ( my fave great poet sis-friend & song writer as well). I can feel the sentiments heartily expressed here. Thank u so much for sharing & once again, many sweet congrats! Stoppin by to say Hi also & sending u & your loved ones many hugs! God bless! lovem4evrLeonora

  1. Date: 5/19/2014 10:11:00 PM
    Girl, this is great! Black rain is all that falls after heartache..

  1. Date: 2/27/2014 1:51:00 PM
    Wow.. Every thing aroung us, our writings are owesome....... I bracelet this poem .... Owesome... Xxx-Bryan'

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 9:34:00 PM
    Thank You...........SKAT

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 9:29:00 PM
    Thank You...........SKAT

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 9:39:00 AM
    emotinal overload that stuns, skat.. beautiful!.. sweet congrats on your win.. huggs

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 5:38:00 PM
    congrats on your win

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 2:31:00 PM
    Skat congratulations on your well deserve win. A heartfelt poem that expressed deep emotions. A excellent write. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 3:56:00 AM
    Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,skat

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 12:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win SKAT--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your mood and sense of song. Thanks for entering my contest.

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 5:17:00 PM
    I noticed your name on the list..Way to go with this winning lyrical work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 1:23:00 PM
    A very beautifully heartfelt poem and especially a song this is my dearest sis Skat. I love it sooo much. I read it many times this morning while singing it both in my heart & mind. A superb lyric & masterpiece (very precious gem) from u! Thank u so much for sharing & my hearty congratulations on your well deserved great win! lovem4evr, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 9:05:00 AM
    This is a very well written poem Skat, Congrats on your win....Hugs...Roger

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 11:15:00 PM
    What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win,Skat

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 3:05:00 PM
    So much emotion in this rendition....well done, and a great tribute to the song!!

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 11:16:00 AM
    A brilliant piece. Mixed emotions while reading this poem of yours. Congratulations on your win friend SKAT. Have a Happy New year to you and to your family. cheers!! :) thanks for all your support..

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 4:20:00 PM
    I can relate so well to this poem, and I think that most of us know this feeling. I could feel the deep emotion coming through your words. A really great poem, SKAT, I loved it!...Thank you so much for the nice comments, once again!

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:52:00 AM
    HI, there, Skat. Just dropping by to thank you for your recent comments and for the contests you and your sis are always sponsoring. it's great to see your contests!