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Black Rain

Black rain falling from the skies, Covering over the tears she cries From all the loneliness kept inside. But for us she grins, at least she tries Day after day the same old fight Against the day and against the light. Waiting for the moon and the night; When its the darkest she shines bright I try to help because I feel the same. A friendship stronger than links in a chain, Sometimes cannot overcome the pain Of a heartache colored stain She smiles at me and I smile too, Both knowing what we have to do. A day at a time just to get through; Till the tear drops turn to green from blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/22/2009 4:34:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Daniel. I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2009 10:18:00 PM
Lovely. Good meter & rhyme. ***Danielle***
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