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i hear you deep within me sirens of sound drowning engine turbine whistle pierce the drum welcome have a seat he will be with you in a bit, he will see you now . the hall is long and dark seems like i have walked this before pause an look at the pictures on the wall and they say nothing at all where have you been ? it has been such a long time you must tell me how you been no time for that now enter here the room is sterilized and you in white standing there looking at me saying "i do" not now i have no time you start the engine and drive off dust clouds whip and bend i hear you calling me ,"wake up " you have been in an accident are you ok ? mind beat up and sober back to where i was

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Date: 2/18/2014 10:39:00 AM
An interesting and creative presentation of what seems to be an awakening after an accident following an emotional trauma....I enjoyed reading this.
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Gregory Ramos
Date: 2/18/2014 8:55:00 PM
thank you for your comment

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