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Black Mansion

Walls covered with paper, To hide the secrets of a murder, Done long ago. As you could still see, where the blood did flow. Of a woman who came at the wrong time to say hello. The full story has never been told, With the house that has never been sold. Still wearing the back paint, Some windows now are alittle taint. Nothing has been changed, Nothing has been removed, Concealed inside are secrets that can never tell, About the woman who took the true story, All the way to hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/22/2014 11:41:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 5/22/2014 6:25:00 PM
Your welcome thank you for your comment-Love Ettie
Date: 5/21/2014 3:21:00 PM
A Deep, Dark, tale. Well written and held my attention. You might make a great mystery writer as well as a poet. Loved the building tension. Welcome to PoetrySoup. I've been here since 2010.
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 5/22/2014 6:24:00 PM
Mystery writer? Maybe so:) thank you for your words -Love Ettie
Date: 5/19/2014 4:19:00 PM
Man we're going to have to go get her girl! A chilling tale in countless truths; cold cases, missing loves without traces ? Yet, if indeed their stars are not too far nor her sea it's depths too deep; ever to hide from, `HIS KING OF LIGHT`....Then surely We hold these Love's keys! Tabitha Cumi Lazarus Arise....Love, Jeremy *
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 5/21/2014 1:13:00 PM
wow well said my friend well said thx-Love Ettie
Date: 5/18/2014 7:02:00 PM
Powerful mystery-thriller write here. I'm really interested in its back story.
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 5/19/2014 11:40:00 AM
Thank you My Friend -Love Ettie

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