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Black Lace Widow

White pages stare at the blood stains of the past White virgin cries then dies red wine to the victor Roses so blue tell tales in the wind Judges three, older than all of thee all of them colorblind

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/2/2016 5:58:00 PM

Intriguing, Aurore. You've picked your words carefully ... I feel as though it's call out against unfair judges through out time. Nice color transitions from "pages" to "virgins", "blood stains" to "red wine" ...

Aurore Severo
Date: 4/10/2016 12:31:00 AM

thank you Timothy xoxo

Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2016 5:30:00 PM

Only a short write, Aurore, but very expressive and impressive! When will true justice be served?! ~ Regards // paul

Aurore Severo
Date: 4/10/2016 12:31:00 AM

Thanks xoxoxoxox

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2016 2:26:00 AM

full of sad emotional imagery - I am probably on the wrong track but the colours remind me of the french flag and also with the recent atrocities in Belgium there will be many people in mourning.:-( hugs Jan xx

Aurore Severo
Date: 4/10/2016 12:29:00 AM

thank you is about all kinds of sadness and injustice.