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Black Is the Sound of Colour

Black is the sound of a thunder storm as it rampages across the landscape the crack of thunder as lightening flashes across the sky pitch black Black is the feeling deep in your gut when something disturbs and scares you as you watch black shapes creep towards you leaving you shaken and wanting to hide Black is the heart full of despair when a loved one is finally lost either to death or relationship breakup black is the grave that waits us all written 12/01/2013 contest The Sound of Colour

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Date: 12/4/2013 3:52:00 PM
the last line. OH MY, that is a stunning close. I really like this one about black.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/6/2013 7:40:00 PM
a fascinating subject each colour does have a sound Andrea pleased that you like it ty Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/3/2013 6:45:00 PM
I am quite patial to black especially when it comes in a sexy nighty. If there is a thunder storm even better, she'll hold me that much tighter. I digress, great poem, good luck in the contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2013 10:44:00 PM
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/6/2013 7:37:00 PM
naughty naughty Rick lol ty dear glad you enjoyed Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/2/2013 5:59:00 PM
Wow, what a finishing kick to your poem. I like how you bring out the color in so many ways.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2013 4:29:00 PM
Hi David ty an interesting colour the ending well..... Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/1/2013 1:13:00 PM
- This is black .... Shadow - Black is deep, dark and scary .... and I love black! - Proficient - two thumbs for you   in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2013 4:27:00 PM
so do I Anne Lise ty dear Shadow x smile hug

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