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Black Hole of Solitude

She is my rising sun, every day she greets me She is my setting sun, at twilight she meets me My world turns around when I see her smiling face I gravitate towards the warmth, of her loving embrace Her pull is strong, I can't resist, it's like some magnetic force Drawing me in ever so closely, we let our love take it's course. She is my moon, she gives me light, in the stillness of the night When the mood changes, she's always there, to help me turn the tide. Now she's gone...my sun won't rise for me anymore My world turns upside down, not round and round There's nothing left but dark and empty spaces No more light or warmth, left only the traces Now begins my journey into endless gloom There's no escaping for me now The black hole of solitude. December 08, 2015 For the Any poem contest sponsored by Broken Wings.

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Date: 6/29/2016 1:54:00 PM
You were right, John, I do like this and I can see the resemblance. Thanks for pointing me in your direction.
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/30/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Phil, we are of the same mind!
Date: 12/17/2015 12:41:00 PM
JOHN, wonderful win. **SKAT**
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2015 9:37:00 PM
Thanks SKAT!
Date: 12/15/2015 3:19:00 PM
John, Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your 1st place win! :-) Alexis
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/16/2015 11:30:00 AM
Thanks Alexis for your kind consideration.
Date: 12/9/2015 9:00:00 PM
this is really good. The format also makes it look so put together! This reminds me of oblivion at the end. I hope it was for the oblivion contest!! It should have been.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/9/2015 11:05:00 PM
Sorry my mistake is for another contest, my oblivion poem is from victor to victim, take a look please, maybe I should make a switch, I value your opinion. Thanks Andrea
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/9/2015 10:35:00 PM
It is for oblivion contest, felt good as it flowed. Thanks Andrea for the nice compliment!John
Date: 12/9/2015 12:06:00 AM
I really like this. Wasn't expecting the turn, so many beautiful lines. Creative layout.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/9/2015 1:24:00 AM
Thanks Susan felt good as it flowed.
Date: 12/8/2015 1:20:00 PM
I agree, it is a darkness that swallows you whole. Your words ring so true in this creative offering John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/8/2015 4:39:00 PM
Thanks Connie appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 12/8/2015 12:52:00 PM
ohh, so mournful yet beautifully done, john!..i am impressed! thanks for your comment on my page.. huggs
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/8/2015 4:41:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comments, your welcome!

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