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Black Diamond Night

. Black velvet was the dress she wore A very fitted gown There were diamonds in her small ears 'Pon her head diamond crown Silver slippers glittered in the dark Adorned with diamond studs Jeweled necklace 'pon graceful neck Elegance of blue blood Diamonds like twinkling stars upon Both her delicate wrist What a vision this lady in black Gone when sun her hand kissed Sponsor:Nathan___ __ Contest:Black Diamond Night

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 6:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nathan's "Black Diamond Night" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Daisy Duck

Date: 9/5/2012 12:48:00 AM

Lovely poem so elegantly expressed!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/4/2012 6:16:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/2/2012 10:33:00 PM

congrats Sara on a marvelous write and win .. most creative luv ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 12:22:00 PM

SARA, finally i'm reading my favorite contest winner list.. congrats in Nathan's super awesome "Black Diamonds Night" contest... have a nice day~ Always & Forever ;-) PD

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/1/2012 9:59:00 AM

Congrats on your win, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Joseph May

Date: 9/1/2012 9:10:00 AM

wonderful write...congrats on your win

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/1/2012 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations Sara on a fine win xx

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/30/2012 11:02:00 AM

beautiful poem, I was picturing this story, almost like Cinderella in my mind. Well done and good luck in the contest. Lee

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 8/30/2012 7:30:00 AM

WOW!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/29/2012 12:50:00 AM

the wonder of a woman vividly impled here, sara.. your ending twists this to its final delight.. best winning wishes and huggs!..:)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/28/2012 5:10:00 PM

This is one of the most intriguing poems that I have read in a long time! Also it has to be one of the best poems in this contest! I really enjoyed the elegance in which you painted this lady to be! What a fabulous poem my friend! Great Work!!