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Black Cloud

This black cloud of mine is heavy I think it's going to pour one day it's rain will start to fall and I know I'll drown for sure. I'm waiting for the lightening strike and the thunder start to roll this cloud has followed me for weeks it's now eating at my soul It's something that I can't escape this storm is overdue I just hope when black clouds pass there will be a better view. Brian Strand's 'Two thru twele contest' 2nd place

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Date: 7/8/2011 6:31:00 PM
An excellent piece here. Great ryme, rhythm and meter. Good imagery with lots of emotion. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/30/2011 8:21:00 PM
i got a black cloud too but i think im shaking it emma. i can relate to this 7up
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Date: 6/30/2011 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations Emma for your win in the contest of Brian Strand "Two Thru Twelve". Love, Carol P. S. I was away and missed congrats on many of Brian's contests. I try but don't know if I will ever catch up.
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:33:00 PM
Congrats Emma on your wonderful second place win in Brian's contest luv.. enjoy for top quality poetry luv..
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:23:00 PM
Killing me softly with the morbid beauty of this piece. I've seen many a black clouds...can't explain it, but you sure did in poetic detail! Nice write Emma.
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Date: 6/19/2011 11:26:00 PM
very nice Emma and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/19/2011 11:18:00 AM
Nice rhythm - I hope you do well in the contest. Mike
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