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I am a hare who cares for you and I love life. I see things in the hues of blues, bold, bright. But you see in pitch black; pure white. My friend, could you please cast a light then look through eyes that make you feel your life is real? ____________ March 7, 2016 Image #3

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Date: 3/11/2016 2:39:00 AM
Brilliant take Lin .. congrats on great win with these lovely words.
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Date: 3/11/2016 3:56:00 AM
Thank you a whole lot, Upma.
Date: 3/10/2016 7:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Lin :)
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Date: 3/11/2016 3:56:00 AM
I thank you, Laura.
Date: 3/10/2016 7:19:00 PM
Lin, congratulations on your black and white contest :-)
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Date: 3/11/2016 3:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve.
Date: 3/10/2016 5:32:00 PM
Hi Lin, Congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Date: 3/11/2016 3:55:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Vlad.
Date: 3/10/2016 3:50:00 PM
congrats on your placement
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Date: 3/10/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thank you, Brian.
Date: 3/10/2016 12:10:00 PM
You did so well with this tricky form, Lin! Love the positivity that you display. Congratulations on your podium finish! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/10/2016 1:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul.
Date: 3/10/2016 10:05:00 AM
Congrats my dear Lady Lin...we have a winner...the lady wins a stuffy puffy rabbit lol...^WW^
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Date: 3/10/2016 10:20:00 AM
lol John, I'll take the stuffy puffy rabbit and your congrats. Thank you.
Date: 3/10/2016 9:21:00 AM
Lin congrats on your placement in the black and white contest :)-luloo*smiles*
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Date: 3/10/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, ma'am and bigger congrats to you.
Date: 3/7/2016 9:58:00 PM
Super cool, Lin ... "the hare who cares" ... how endearing. You made this difficult form feel very natural with awesome rhymes.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/8/2016 2:38:00 AM
Thank you, kind sir.
Date: 3/7/2016 10:55:00 AM
I really like this one, Peaches. Reads like a winner to me! Peace my lovely friend:)
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Date: 3/7/2016 1:53:00 PM
I liked the bunny. Thanks, Danny.
Date: 3/7/2016 10:23:00 AM
Nice, nice, nice. This is a winner, Lin.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2016 1:53:00 PM
Thank you lots, DMB
Date: 3/7/2016 10:04:00 AM
Superb. I honestly loved this. It flowed well. This form was a challenge for me. Great write, my dear.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2016 1:53:00 PM
Thank you, Eileen.

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