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black and white keys play our song of sweet love in my dream, oh the pain of lost love hurts, black and white keys I miss you, oh dark death I thought we could grow old as one, oh pain, black death blank white my life since you left me ____________________ March 6, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Black and White Copyright Protected, ID 16-764-724-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Inspiration, Image #1, Piano Keys For the contest, United Colors: Black and White (25 lines, 2 words per line (50 word 1 syllable words) sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 11:18:00 AM

Broken. Congratulations on your awesome Black and White united theme win. Love LINDA

Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 2:51:00 PM

Linda, thanks for the congratulations and the awesome ~

Daver Austin

Date: 3/11/2016 4:50:00 PM

A sad tune, B.W. I hope you can find a way to play Ich Leiba dich. I don't know German, just guessing. Anywho, luck in the contest. daver

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 5:08:00 PM

Dave, thanks so much for visiting my poem, and I happily got 2nd place in the contest !

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/11/2016 6:43:00 AM

Great write:) congratulations on your brilliant win:)

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 6:22:00 PM

Jo, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations and the brilliant !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/11/2016 2:35:00 AM

Brilliant take Broken .. congrats on great win with these lovely words..

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 6:35:00 PM

Upma, thanks for the brilliant, the congrats and the lovely !

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 3/10/2016 9:37:00 PM

Wonderful use of black & white in our life. Congrats Constance... Hugs, Bobby

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 6:46:00 PM

Bobby, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats and hugs !

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/10/2016 7:14:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Constance :)

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 7:48:00 PM

Laura, thanks for the congrats, appreciate !

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/10/2016 5:14:00 PM

Hi Constance, Congratulations an a well deserved high placing for this emotional piece. Eyes sparkle with tears as one follows the words from beginning to end. Once more your words do stir the heart Constance. There pain sings and the emotions are stirred and tears lift the heart to the stars. An excellent write my friend. A seven and into my faves....MIKE.

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2016 5:45:00 PM

Mike, thanks for the congratulations and the excellent, the seven and the fav and the lovely comment, appreciate so much ~

Eve Roper

Date: 3/10/2016 5:13:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win :) !!Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2016 5:59:00 PM

Eve, thanks so much for the congrats and the hugs !

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/10/2016 1:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Janice

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2016 6:03:00 PM

Janice, thank you so much for the congratulations !

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/10/2016 1:13:00 PM

Your emotional piece well deserves top honors Constance. Big congratulations dear lady!

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2016 6:16:00 PM

Connie, thank you for the congratulations and the nice comment !

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/10/2016 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations. Your lost love plays a haunting tune.. Hugs, Suz

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2016 6:23:00 PM

Suzanne, thank you for the congratulations and the hugs !

Sarita Milliner

Date: 3/10/2016 11:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement Broken Wings!!

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2016 11:16:00 AM

Sarita, thanks so much for visiting with the congratulations !

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/10/2016 9:49:00 AM

Another win...congrats Wings...^WW^

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2016 10:51:00 AM

Winged, thanks for the congrats !

Lu Loo

Date: 3/10/2016 9:17:00 AM

Congrats on your placement BW...-luloo*smiles*

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2016 10:52:00 AM

Laura, thanks for visiting with the congrats and smiles !

Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2016 8:51:00 AM

Lovely take on black & white piano keys, Constance; the sad streak that runs through it makes it a worthy winner. Congratulations! // paul

Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2016 10:52:00 AM

Paul, thanks so much for the lovely, the compliments and the congratulations ~

Eve Roper

Date: 3/8/2016 2:17:00 PM

Exquisite write, Broken Wing, good luck in the contest a7!!!!!

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2016 7:55:00 PM

Eve, thanks for visiting with the exquisite, I love that word and the 7 !

James Inman

Date: 3/8/2016 10:48:00 AM

Very, very nice. Follows the form beautifully. I really like this, BW.

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2016 12:11:00 PM

James, thanks for visiting my poem with the beautiful. ..

David Aaron

Date: 3/8/2016 1:20:00 AM

Such a beautiful blend of melancholy and longing.

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2016 7:33:00 AM

David, thanks so much for visiting with the beautiful !

Red Fiery

Date: 3/7/2016 9:47:00 PM

Life plays a different tune at times . Misery has taught us defiant endurance...my thoughts are with you, broken wings...I rememeber, I got a placement in one of your contests..the angel cries at night...I fondly remember. ps I have read your poems and they are breathtaking...

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2016 7:47:00 AM

Red, thanks for visiting my poem with that beautiful comment, it truly touched my heart ~

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/7/2016 6:51:00 PM

Darkly done great BW...(:^WW^:)

Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2016 8:11:00 PM

WW, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate !

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/7/2016 8:42:00 AM

A wonderful moving poem for the contest Constance. This was a hard one I thought. Good luck my friend!

Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2016 6:19:00 PM

Connie, thanks for visiting with the wonderful !