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Black and White

United Colours: Black and White Sponsor: Silent One Your tune sweeps me so high and free but then I hear B sharp with tears and in sweet trance I swoon in dance with your souls notes while your voice floats on the soft strings as a bird sings you still move me with black and white grand keys ***I used picture number one for this poem*** ~Date Written: March 6, 2016~

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Jai Bankson

Date: 3/14/2016 2:38:00 AM

Very smooth,congrats on the win..In the words of Mr. Lee''Be like water my friend''nailed it

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/11/2016 9:50:00 AM

Excellent job of flow and content considering the limited syllable count. I missed this contest, but what a fun challenge! And you met this challenge with a beautifully creative and emotional write. Great job, LuLo - and congrats on your deserved win ... CayCay

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 11:57:00 AM

Thank you sweet CayCay :) You are the best...:)-luloo *Smiles* *thanks*

Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 3/11/2016 8:37:00 AM

This poem paints a wonderful picture of love. Interesting take on this.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 9:39:00 AM

Thank you Angeline :)-luloo

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/11/2016 6:41:00 AM

This one is so nice combining music and love. Great job and congratulations on top place win:)

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 9:39:00 AM

Thank you Jo...-luloo :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/11/2016 2:33:00 AM

Brilliant take Laura... congrats on great win with these lovely words..

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 9:38:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma :)-luloo

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/10/2016 9:15:00 PM

Back again ... I thought this would place high, and so it did. Congrats :)

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Timothy :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2016 8:58:00 PM

this is gorgeous, and if it won high, I can see WHY!!! Congrats

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 9:09:00 PM

Thank you Andrea very much :)-luloo

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/10/2016 7:13:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Laura :)

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 9:08:00 PM

Thank you Laura very much :)-luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 3/10/2016 5:07:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your 1st place win :) way to go girl

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 6:22:00 PM

Many thanks Eve. You are a big sweetheart always....-luloo *smiles*

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/10/2016 4:52:00 PM

My apologies Luloo, i have done it again, said i was given you a seven and forgot to put the rating in. Here we go....Vlad.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 6:21:00 PM

Your silly, thank you again...-luloo

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/10/2016 4:50:00 PM

Hi Luloo, Congratulations in your first place win in the contest. I so enjoyed the read. I was swept up in the emotion of your write and my Soul took to the wing to dance within the stars. A beautiful, Soulful write Luloo. A seven and into my faves....Vlad.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 6:20:00 PM

Vlad, thank you for all your kind words and nice compliments. You are very sweet. Have a good night-luloo *smiles*

Brian Davey

Date: 3/10/2016 3:38:00 PM

Congratulations Laura, well deserved

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 6:18:00 PM

Thank you Brian...-luloo *smiles*

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/10/2016 1:32:00 PM

Excellent, Jan. Congratulations! Janice

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 2:52:00 PM

Lol! I've done the same thing before no worries! Thank you -luloo *smiles*

Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/10/2016 1:33:00 PM

OOPS! Make that congrats to Laura! Janice

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/10/2016 1:09:00 PM

Yay! You are at the top and so deserve to be. I loved your entry luloo! Congratulations my friend! #7

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 2:51:00 PM

Thank you once again Connie-luloo *smiles*

Sam Jameson

Date: 3/10/2016 12:57:00 PM

Very smooth-- nice flow. Congratulations, luloo, on the podium spot-- a job well done.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Sam...-luloo *smiles*

Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2016 12:01:00 PM

A musical and romantic take which truly merited placing first, Laura. Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 12:21:00 PM

Many thanks Paul :) -luloo *smiles*

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 3/10/2016 11:48:00 AM

Luloo, I'm in trance. Congrats on this wonderful top spot win. Hugs, Bobby

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 12:20:00 PM

Bobby thank you very much *smiles*~luloo

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/10/2016 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations on a sweeping win. Hugs, SuZ

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 12:19:00 PM

Suz, thank you very much:) -luloo *smiles*

Constance La France

Date: 3/10/2016 10:57:00 AM

Laura, back to say, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful win ~

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 12:17:00 PM

BW, thank you very much...-luloo :)-*smiles*

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/10/2016 10:20:00 AM

Congrats Laura to win on top Love. Anisha D

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 12:15:00 PM

Thank you Anisha:) -luloo*smiles*

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/10/2016 9:51:00 AM

You won...again!...congrats Laura...^WW^

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 12:15:00 PM

Thank you WW -luloo:) -*smiles*

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/10/2016 9:21:00 AM

It danced. Congratulations on the win...

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Charlie -luloo*smiles*

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/10/2016 8:50:00 AM

Beautifully done, Laura! Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sanda

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 9:03:00 AM

Thank you Sandra very much for all your kind feedback :)-luloo*smiles*

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/8/2016 7:49:00 PM

Oh luloo, you did a splendid job on this difficult form! Your entry should place high! #7

Lu Loo
Date: 3/8/2016 8:51:00 PM

Thank you very much sweet lady :)-luloo

Ingrid Showalter Swift

Date: 3/8/2016 1:32:00 AM

Very cool photo image and love captured in your word notes!

Lu Loo
Date: 3/8/2016 8:51:00 PM

thank you Ingrid :)-luloo