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Black and White

The view was pleasing, The heart at peace. Yet the rain kept falling, On the exact same place. Making a tiny hole, Through the heart's soft skin. Spilling red and white, On the bare white snow

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Date: 8/20/2023 5:26:00 PM
a beautiful image, emotionnal and vivid, thanks
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/21/2023 3:35:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 8/20/2023 4:46:00 PM
Hmmm trying to figure this little riddle of a poem out. Is it blood dripping on the snow?
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/21/2023 2:54:00 AM
Yeah, it's blood Tom. Thanks a lot

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