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Black

Bleak and gloomy is this recurring dream Long and raven falls my ebony hair And dark and inky is the surreal unlit sky Can I find my way out of this murky gloom, and Keep the mournful, forlorn ghosts away _____________________________________ September 1, 2013 Poetry/Acrostic/Black Copyright Protected, ID 09-502-879-01 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2013 10:02:00 PM

Congratulations with your awesome Acrostic poem *** LOVE ***LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/20/2013 4:06:00 PM

Broken,, Congratulations, with your awesome and fun Acrostic ........ luv ~SKAT~

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/16/2013 5:42:00 AM

I really like this one. Very well done and congrats on your win. :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/15/2013 8:51:00 AM

Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/15/2013 7:04:00 AM

beautifully written, congrats on your win!

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/15/2013 3:53:00 AM

Congrats on your win.Morgan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2013 3:43:00 AM

You showed black in a beautiful way, as always, Constance. And I appreciate so much you and the others who are careful with spelling and grammar!!! Congrats on your win.

Jack Horne

Date: 9/6/2013 1:48:00 PM

loved this and I know Andrea will love it too

Joseph May

Date: 9/2/2013 7:20:00 AM

very nicely penned....

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/1/2013 4:28:00 PM

You even created a Halloween like poem for Andrea's contest, I'm so glad to see this my friend! This is a tremendous write on the subject of black, and to come up with so many words that resemble black is quite impressive! I surely loved reading this fabulous poem this evening! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!