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~~ Bleak and gloomy is this recurring dream Long and raven falls my ebony hair And dark and inky is the surreal unlit sky Can I find my way out of this murky gloom, and Keep the mournful, forlorn ghosts away _____________________________________ September 1, 2013 Acrostic Written for the contest, I love Five!, Andrea Dietrich

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  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:02:00 PM
    Congratulations with your awesome Acrostic poem *** LOVE ***LINDA

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:06:00 PM
    Broken,, Congratulations, with your awesome and fun Acrostic ........ luv ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 5:42:00 AM
    I really like this one. Very well done and congrats on your win. :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 8:51:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:04:00 AM
    beautifully written, congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 3:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your win.Morgan

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 3:43:00 AM
    You showed black in a beautiful way, as always, Constance. And I appreciate so much you and the others who are careful with spelling and grammar!!! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 1:48:00 PM
    loved this and I know Andrea will love it too

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 7:20:00 AM
    very nicely penned....

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 4:28:00 PM
    You even created a Halloween like poem for Andrea's contest, I'm so glad to see this my friend! This is a tremendous write on the subject of black, and to come up with so many words that resemble black is quite impressive! I surely loved reading this fabulous poem this evening! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!