Black

dark night envelopes as black shimmers hug her curves sparkling on charcoal the soft rays of the black pearl twining around her hot wrist 8/5/13

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2018 10:52:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive work. Alluring the night and the person of the night. Sara

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 6/19/2013 3:25:00 AM

Tahera excellent tanka.comment on my poems

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2013 12:17:00 PM

Tahera, just stopping by your lovely tanka again to say hi. hope you are doing ok.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2013 8:48:00 PM

Tahera, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda

Daver Austin

Date: 5/28/2013 12:31:00 PM

This is dark. Everything says "beware." Congrats on the selection. daver

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/27/2013 11:20:00 PM

Very nice write!! :) - Edward

Len Gasun

Date: 5/23/2013 6:19:00 PM

My hearty congratulations as well on your fabulous win my dear friend, Tahera! love/lots, Leonora

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2013 3:08:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading your unique entry to the contest..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/21/2013 11:01:00 AM

sensuality at ots best, tahera...congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/21/2013 9:14:00 AM

congrats Tahera on your win, beautifully done

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/21/2013 1:14:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Tahera, well done xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2013 12:53:00 AM

wow, Tahera, Of all the black ones I got, yours was the tops!!! I mean, that last part, twining around her hot wrist. Amazing. Congrats in my contest.

Tahera Mannan
Date: 5/22/2013 7:26:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, it means a lot.

Joseph May

Date: 5/20/2013 9:22:00 PM

congrats on a fine win

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2013 9:02:00 PM

this is an awesome choice of BLACK , for Andrea... Tanka me a color. CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/20/2013 8:08:00 PM

Brave to pick black to write about..you did it justice. congrats on your win. BG

Elai Cee

Date: 5/14/2013 10:43:00 PM

what a magical poem!---keep smilig, Elai. You can see my writings and appreciating your comment there!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/14/2013 5:33:00 PM

Ahhh!!Winning material for sure in my book..Enjoyed reading the expressiveness of your color black..Thanks for the visits..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/14/2013 10:09:00 AM

Tahera, wow this is some poetry, so beautiful, so special.....

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/13/2013 5:43:00 AM

Whew!...

Jack Horne

Date: 5/11/2013 2:54:00 PM

beautiful tanka, Congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/10/2013 2:01:00 AM

- Tahera, thanks for letting me read your gorgeous poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)