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Bizarre Whims of February

With uproar, vexed, the bone-chilling wind blows... the wooden and unlocked windows of the hut slam; winter delights in the whims of February that can be so destructive and savage to an unspoiled haven hidden from remote civilization, thus feeling no sympathy for the fragile maples: bending, squeaking and cracking as if they were in pain! The furious wind batters steadily,commanding the red-tailed hawks, watching the hungry wolves hunt the scary deer, to flee over the tumbleweed and mud-filled streams with agitation. Dispersed by the gelid gusts, the bouncing clouds fret, and illuminated by silver bolts of lightning, they seem to dissolve in their intense, fiery heat; where's the friendly sun, the light-giver, to make darkness vanish and restore tranquility in this wilderness visited by bald and golden eagles? And is it a passing hurricane, or a threatening storm with hail and snow?

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Date: 3/1/2010 6:14:00 AM
congrats on the win!!
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:29:00 PM
Very vivid imagery, Andrew. We can feel the power of this storm. Dynamite! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:10:00 PM
Love the conent of this entry. Congratulations! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/18/2010 5:08:00 AM
Much kudos to you, Andrew, for participating in the “Mission Impossible! Blank Verse Brain Tease” Contest sponsored by: Deborah Guzzi. Entering was a challenging process. But you WON too! Congratulation! Drum Rolls!!! Yippee! I am happy for you. Your poem makes me think of the Desert Southwest during a rare, but havoc wrecking storm...with tumbleweed tossing everywhere. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/17/2010 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your success with this fine poem.....Margaret
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Date: 2/17/2010 5:33:00 PM
congrats on placing, in the contest!! great job.
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Date: 2/17/2010 4:50:00 PM
The vivid imagery carries your thought in an interesting way in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Deborah's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 2/17/2010 4:18:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in the Mission Impossible contest.. a wonderful win for a more wonderful poem from a most wonderful poet.. enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/17/2010 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations on placing with this great poetry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/17/2010 7:19:00 AM
Very interesting poetry today Andrew. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/17/2010 2:32:00 AM
I enjoyed that, thanks
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Date: 2/16/2010 8:40:00 PM
Always giving us fantastic imagery in your writes, Andrew! I enjoyed this! However, I have had enough of the snow. I enjoyed it but I've had my fill! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/16/2010 4:05:00 PM
The friendly sun is shining on my friendly Eugene, Oregon ... smile ... GREAT writing here, Andrew ... beautiful imagery! I feel the cold and see those silver bolts !!
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Date: 2/16/2010 3:07:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem,, It seems.. The Hurricaine with its Hail and Storm,,is staying for a while,Wish you loads of Sunshine:)Charma
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Date: 2/16/2010 3:02:00 PM
You took me on a much needed journey with this tale....Good work....:JP]
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Date: 2/16/2010 12:53:00 PM
Very descriptive and expression I thought that I was going to have to take cover and have to stay in for awhile. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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