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Bittersweet Wait

My Sunshine at the sight of your words Your chance glance upon my words A riotous burst of Sunflower seeds Droplets at a thundering pace Rips away the cobwebs of silence Sunset when I stare at empty space Had I known this sweet bitter taste Would have closed my heart in tearful haste

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Keelu Ak

Date: 6/2/2014 5:28:00 AM

Thanks to all for reading my poem and appreciating it. For an amateur like me, it means a lot.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/29/2014 10:04:00 PM

Very nice verse. Adored it to the core. Love the simplicity with it. Excellent job & do pen on! -DWB a well-deserved 6 out of 7.

Earl Schumacker

Date: 5/29/2014 5:10:00 PM

Hi Keelu AK, You have a very interesting name by the way. This is a deliciously raw poem. I read it a few times. It has real substance. Keep up the great work. Have a great day. Earl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2014 6:11:00 AM

Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/8/2014 8:27:00 AM

this is sweet at same time bitter, as in the title... enjoyed, Keelu, . , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/6/2014 2:20:00 PM

Like the ending... Keelu, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT