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Bittersweet Christmas

Christmas for me is bittersweet, I can still smell mother's cooking; A green frosty pine scented tree, Snow falling like delicate lace. I can still smell mother's cooking, She loved the holiday season; I like december and the cold, But Christmas for me is sadness. A green frosty pine scented tree, Father draped it with glowing lights; I would hang the colorful balls, Grandma threw the silver tinsel. Snow falling like delicate lace, Still, love to watch the white falling; And my little nest shines so bright, With those same old decorations. __________________________ October 25, 2015 French Retourne For the contest, Shall we Retourne Sponsor, Debbie Guzzi Fourth Place

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Date: 11/28/2015 8:31:00 AM
Shall We Retourne sounds like a tough one but you did it with this winner !!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2015 3:03:00 PM
Sara thanks for visiting and for the congrats ~
Date: 11/26/2015 8:11:00 PM
A sweet reflective write! Congrats on your win, Constance! Love, Kim
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Constance La France
Date: 11/27/2015 3:51:00 PM
Kim thanks for the sweet and the congrats ~
Date: 11/26/2015 12:14:00 PM
Wonderfully crafted words to fit the form. Congrats on your win.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/26/2015 12:19:00 PM
Dan thanks for visiting and for the congrats
Date: 11/24/2015 7:11:00 PM
Bittersweet and beautiful, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 11/26/2015 12:17:00 PM
Sandra thanks for visiting my poem, and the congratulations
Date: 11/23/2015 8:54:00 AM
Hi SO: I can certainly relate to that beautiful poem. My compliments.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 10:14:00 AM
Ralph, thanks for the visit and for the compliment ~
Date: 11/22/2015 9:28:00 AM
Conrad's Constance [and you'll always be a dearheart to me] thanks so much for trying & brilliantly succeeding at a new form! Light & Love
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Constance La France
Date: 11/22/2015 2:19:00 PM
Debbie, thank you so much for that wonderful contest and awesome form, I am so honored to have placed, thanks for the congrats ~
Date: 11/21/2015 11:20:00 PM
Broken,, Congratulations on your win. ...Love SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 11/22/2015 8:34:00 AM
Skat, thanks for the congrats ~
Date: 10/25/2015 6:50:00 PM
When those we celebrated and celebrated with are no longer with us, it is no less than completely bittersweet. Your emotional poem is most tender and loving, very touching ... CayCay
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Constance La France
Date: 10/25/2015 6:58:00 PM
Thanks for the visit CayCay, Christmas is different now, not the same, never will be, but I love those memories ~
Date: 10/25/2015 4:20:00 PM
:) :) :) LIGHT & Love Always dearheart
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Constance La France
Date: 10/25/2015 6:59:00 PM
OH Debbie, thanks for the thumbs up, I love dear heart as you recall that is what my grandma called me ~
Date: 10/25/2015 1:36:00 PM
Although mother and father and grandma are in heaven now, they left me with a love for Christmas ~
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2015 4:15:00 PM
wonderful wirite, Broken Wing, a treasure left behind from a loved one is so wonderful.

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