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Bitter Are the Tears of Release

My life was good until you came You changed my life Im not the same As I was when we met The first time. I love you but... I can't live anymore knowing that you might not feel the same way. Having to kick you out of my life Is not going to be the easiest thing I've ever done but the pain is just... unbearable. Tears stroll down my face, As if they are at a park. But it gets crowded after a few moments because more join them. Soon, they roll off the brown surface of my face Onto my jacket. They just won't stop coming. Like it's a perfect day out. The bitter weather is just so appealing to them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/21/2009 4:59:00 AM
yours is quality poetry'
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Date: 11/19/2009 11:05:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Hosea. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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