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Bitter

I started drinking my coffee black Because it impressed you When I downed it at your house that day And this evening, My thoughts of you were just as bitter As the taste left in my mouth From the coffee as black as the hole In my heart/ In my head That I had thought you had begun to fill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/11/2014 3:48:00 PM
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Date: 7/11/2014 3:46:00 PM
*)~(- Tis The Only Hole We Know Baby Girl! Congratulations, Upon Your Beauty's Lovely Poe Making Front Page News Here At Her Loving's PoetrySoup....KLove *
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Date: 7/11/2014 2:55:00 PM
Hi Cossette, Brilliant piece of work. It is one of the best things I have read in recent times. Congratulations on creating a real, genuine, deep poem with real substance and merit. Keep up the great work. Take care. Earl
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Date: 7/9/2014 12:33:00 AM
Cossette, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/8/2014 7:48:00 PM
Really liked your Poem.. :) regards deepak
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Date: 7/8/2014 6:02:00 PM
Love this write of yours, Cossette! As strong as your black coffee...and bitter with disappointment, too! // paul
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Date: 7/7/2014 8:05:00 PM
Cossette,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2014 5:37:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Cossette. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/27/2014 11:29:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Cossette Valdez
Date: 6/29/2014 10:45:00 PM
thank you for reading!
Date: 6/27/2014 8:42:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Cossette :) - I choose your first well written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/27/2014 12:20:00 AM
Cosette,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/27/2014 12:18:00 AM
Hello Cossette, Welcome to PS I believe you will have a wonderful experience here as we enjoy all your poetic art and heart, You are now part of a great family that i believe will be a great blessing .. Hope to follow up all your work ..Your new PS friend RRC
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