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Bits and Pieces -Two Etheree

BITS AND PIECES – two etheree life a short existence by a window – this simple stranger in a complex structure watching earth, land, sea and sky pass o’er plains and woods and mountains high to slowly, endlessly strive and gather, by blind reason, bits and pieces of truth choose the sound that lifts soul – a sweet music given by heaven to light man’s awareness and which soothes the savage breast, for the world, ever violent. needs the international strains, inspired music, with words of peace and love Dave Austin

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Date: 2/7/2017 11:25:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and doncern, but, no -breast describes the sweet music. Love, daver
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Date: 2/7/2017 11:27:00 AM
Whoops - concern
Date: 2/5/2017 7:58:00 PM
very lovely, my friend. I am so glad I thought to come visit you today and find these new etheree. I hope you are well. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/3/2017 3:42:00 AM
Daver, both of these poems are outstanding. You made good use of the etheree form. In the first one, you convey the growth and knowledge that comes as a person matures. The second shows the comfort and peacefulness that music promotes. Excellent! Haven't heard whom you want to sin in the Super Bowl. I'm cheering for the Falcons. Lots of problems lately. We should catch up!
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Daver Austin
Date: 2/3/2017 11:12:00 AM
Well i'm influenced by Brady because he was Michigan's quarterback way back when, but maybe it's someone elses turn to win. Love, Old Dave

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