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Biting the Bullet

I am calculating a stack of bills, about to lose my wits! But, I’d rather attack with dynamite, and blow the bills to bits! ................. For Susan Burch's Couplet Contest

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2011 12:37:00 PM

If you have any extra dynamite, please send it to me. LOL Very funny, but also quite true for most people these days, Carrie. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2011 10:16:00 AM

Good morning and congratulations on your win in Susan's "Couplet Challenge" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2011 11:01:00 PM

Great one, Carrie, and congrats on your win.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 9/29/2011 5:00:00 PM

Me too Carrie :) The electric bill I just opened was $167!!! And come to think of it...the dynamite method wouldn't even be using any electric-good plan :) Congrats. to you!

James Peranteau

Date: 9/29/2011 9:58:00 AM

Really ! Why pay the "bills", when you can buy a dress ! *smiles* Amusing write dear poet, and a pleasure to read ! Have a beautiful week Carrie, I missed your writes...much love, james

John Smith

Date: 9/28/2011 5:28:00 PM

Don't have fits, use your wits, call it quits.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/28/2011 5:13:00 PM

Smiles!!!!! JUst what the soups needs... That is so true!! with luv Michael

Tony Lane

Date: 9/28/2011 4:05:00 PM

Another senseless suicide billing. Tony