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Bite the Bullet

Putting on my makeup is challenging I have Tardive Dyskinesia I'll blot my lipstick while babbling Putting on my makeup is challenging While adding my eye shadow balancing Cover up glided though Synaesthesia Putting on my makeup is challenging I have Tardive Dyskinesia

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/21/2020 6:24:00 AM

Your Triolet is very expressive, Angela. Tardive Dyskinesia can be taxing, but I have read about people who deal with it with good results (Michael J. Fox comes to mind). ~ Regards // paul

Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/21/2020 4:23:00 PM

Thank you, Paul :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/29/2020 5:00:00 AM

So well done; good luck in the contest Angi.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/29/2020 4:46:00 PM

Thank you, Caren

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/27/2020 6:17:00 PM

Angie, your poem is potent in its poetic and emotional force. Especially your last line, it is as impactful as it is moving. A triolet of deep expression. Inspiring and enlightening poetry, my friend. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/28/2020 5:47:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. I really appreciate it. It was the only thing I could think of to write about in this form "Bite the bullet" :)

Mike Bayles

Date: 10/27/2020 3:21:00 PM

Good rhyme

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/27/2020 3:30:00 PM

Thank you, Mike. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/27/2020 10:50:00 AM

- Involuntary body movements and make-up can certainly be a challenge, Angela :) - I always have wet eyes ... (tears) and very sensitive skin ... I rarely wear makeup ... - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/27/2020 3:29:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. i really appreciate you reading and commenting. :)

Silent One

Date: 10/27/2020 7:29:00 AM

I am sorry that you have this condition, not easy for anyone, let alone a lady... You did this triolet very well..

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/27/2020 3:28:00 PM

Thank you, Silent One. As always I appreciate your visit. :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/27/2020 7:22:00 AM

As a women I love to wear make up , But having chronic dry eye makes it impossible it stays on for a little bit then have to wash it off. Good luck in the contest. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/27/2020 3:26:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. I really appreciate you reading and commenting. :)