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Bite Me

What do you mean, you don't like my hair? It's your opinion, but do you think I care? The note you left on the mirror today, full of hate, and misery, a mistake I pray. I tried to be the woman of your dreams, But nothing seems good enough it seems. The snide remarks you seem to bait, About my face, my job, my weight. My thighs, my chin, my eyes, clothes worn. All became the subject of your scorn. I've finally had enough... I plea, Accept me As Is, or just Bite Me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/12/2015 10:41:00 AM
Oh, I see 11th place. I'll take it!! lol. Thanks everyone.
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Date: 6/12/2015 10:34:00 AM
I won the contest?? I'm so honored. Thank you! And just for the record...it's totally fictional. I have a loving and supportive husband who loves every wrinkle, bump, and bulge. tee hee.
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Date: 6/12/2015 12:28:00 AM
Nice win...PD
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Mary Waldeck
Date: 6/13/2015 11:40:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/12/2015 12:19:00 AM
Wonderful take on theme Mary! Congrats on ur win!
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Mary Waldeck
Date: 6/13/2015 11:40:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/11/2015 3:47:00 PM
If you add up all the imperfection....you are perfect!! Just as you are and were when he saw perfection.....Thanks for entering the contest.
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Mary Waldeck
Date: 6/13/2015 11:41:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/11/2015 3:40:00 PM
Forget Bite me - I'd boot him! Congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Mary Waldeck
Date: 6/13/2015 11:41:00 PM
Lol. Thank you!
Date: 6/11/2015 3:35:00 PM
Mary, Congratulations in John's BITE ME contest. **SKAT**
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Mary Waldeck
Date: 6/13/2015 11:42:00 PM
Thank you!

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