Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Birthday Suit Blues

jack horne Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Birthday Suit Blues which was written by poet jack horne. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by jack horne

Best Jack Horne Poems

+ Fav Poet

Birthday Suit Blues

A girlfriend took me to a nudist camp,
And, wrapped up in my overcoat, I sighed;
The sky was grey, the site was chilled and damp;
In shock, I shuddered as I coldly eyed
The frozen naked forms - and tried to hide.
I kept my socks on, shivered with the cold;
My shaking shrunken form was feeling old. 
I fetched my sweater, grabbed my trousers too -
And wondered that those bodies were so bold;
But warm, I watched them turning shades of blue. 

Just fiction – but I always wonder if nudists wear a sweater on cold days…
For Cyndi’s Birthday Suit contest

Copyright © jack horne

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 8:16:00 PM
    jack you did a great job. I'm sure if you had described yourself, you'd have scored much higher!! Anyway, congrats on the HM, my friend.

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 7:35:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Jack. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 6:32:00 AM
    A witty poem, Jack. Congratulations!!! :)

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 5:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your birthday suit HM Jack and I think they must they don't want bits freezing off do they . Jack xx

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 3:11:00 AM
    Jack congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 10:06:00 AM
    Jack good imagery here, is it fiction? ha ha ..David

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 10:05:00 PM
    how charming and full of winsome energy, jack.. go for the win in the nude!... huggs! :)

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 8:39:00 PM
    hahaha, what an imagination, Jack. It must be interesting to see those weird bodies walking around. You gotta think half of them are terrible looking. Cute one.

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 4:54:00 PM
    I enjoyed your write on the nudist camp, you should go ask my aunt she visited one I wrote a poem called The Nudist Colony thought you might like to read it, luv vie

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 3:36:00 PM
    Well, Jack, maybe there are nudist colonies only in warm climates..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..I have wondered about nudist colonies also...Sara

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 2:22:00 PM
    Every bit a winner Jack...Enjoyed this..It sure brought a smile!!...Love Diana

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 2:17:00 PM
    That's really crazy, staying out in the freezing cold...Naked! Your write is truly amazing, I love it! I'm glad it was just fiction cause I believe that nudists are smarter than that..."turning shades of blue."! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this afternoon! Great Work!!