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Birthday Lady From Algiers

A birthday lady from Algiers Full of despair and woeful tears Cos to her surprise She cant see her eyes Too many wrinkles seemed to appear She went to her doc for advice Saying look at me I don't look nice So she had a face tuck Now with any luck She will lose that look of surprise. Penned 18/05/2014

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2014 6:09:00 PM

Seren,, Double Congrats on Carolyn’s birthday contest. Many smiles, on its future feature in her birthday booklet. XOX~ Linda

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/29/2014 4:08:00 PM

LOL! Congratulations on a fantastic win, Seren!

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2014 9:03:00 PM

Thanks Annalise.....Seren

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/28/2014 3:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win! This gave me the chuckle that I needed today!

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2014 3:42:00 PM

Lol made me chuckle too....Seren

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 5/27/2014 10:12:00 PM

It's a witty write.Congrats on the win, Seren!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2014 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Jag ....Seren

Paul Callus

Date: 5/27/2014 9:46:00 AM

Lovely and witty set! Congrats on a deserved win! // paul

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2014 10:59:00 AM

Hi Paul nice to see you, thx for stopping by....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/27/2014 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win, Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2014 6:58:00 AM

Thank you Ram .... Seren

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2014 8:40:00 PM

Seren, Congratulations, in Carolyn's "Birthday and Aging Humor" contest. Love ~SKAT~

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2014 2:19:00 AM

thank you Skat ...Seren

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/26/2014 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your limericks and your win. Love, joyce

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2014 2:20:00 AM

Thank you Joyce for stopping by...Seren

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2014 4:34:00 PM

Dear Seren, The second verse blew me away and it is featured in the birthday booklet. Congratulations on your win and thanks for participating in a contest to wish some special ladies happy birthday. Love, Carolyn

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2014 2:21:00 AM

Was fun to do Carolyn, thank you for the placement...Seren

Jack Horne

Date: 5/18/2014 1:47:00 PM

LOL, had a chuckle picturing this : )

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/18/2014 6:22:00 PM

Lol Jack all who have face lifts seem to look surprised....thx for stopping by ......Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2014 4:36:00 AM

LOL Love this humourous write Seren. Hugs Jan xxx

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/18/2014 6:58:00 AM

thank Jan trying to be funny and ok for all ages isn't always easy..... Seren