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Birthday Day

The three level cake With chocolate top frosting Waits to be served with Two vainilla ice cream scoops At the end of the party 1-24-2016

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Date: 1/24/2016 8:20:00 PM
Now that's a description of the right way to do a birthday...nicely penned, Nayda.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/24/2016 8:52:00 PM
Thank you David
Date: 1/24/2016 5:10:00 AM
a nice birthday there, excellent tanka
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/24/2016 6:11:00 AM
Thank you White Sage
Date: 1/24/2016 5:01:00 AM
Logical humor, nice.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/24/2016 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Daniel
Date: 1/23/2016 10:56:00 PM
that sounds yummy love it
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/24/2016 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Fullmoon

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