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Birth of a Sonnet

Alas and alack, my fellow poets For 't seems I hath not writ a sonnet yet Unbeknownst, too short were such lines I penned 'twas said my syllables were not well met Advice, I take thee well, accepting that True knowledge is a path we all must seek Applying wit, the ink doth flow again To write these words my soul demands to speak For, there is one, whose inspiration finds A warm place in my heart in which to dwell Though blossoming and yet within its youth In knowing her, I long to know her well This humble scribe will go to any length To write such words as give her inner strength ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/2/2008 3:40:00 AM
Aha, such a folly, be mine as well, my poetic friend! I spent my last night writing 2 new proper sonnets! I love them, and hey, just cause they don't have 10 syllables per line, does not make them any less worthy! Love Kristin
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Date: 11/1/2008 11:33:00 AM
Smiles and laughter! Very well "writ!" Thanks for reminding me that it is all Saints DAY! I thought that was tomorrow!
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Date: 11/1/2008 10:17:00 AM
Such a lovely fair maiden she must be, to have captured your heart of pure gold! You astound me with your devotion, Nigel! Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/1/2008 10:04:00 AM
Nigel this is very beautiful and it also has a mysterious side to it - Who be the fair madden that this scribe will go to such lengths for - Stay tuned for only time will tell - God Bless
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Date: 11/1/2008 9:03:00 AM
You are so much in love! Lucky girl. I love the touch of humor. BG
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