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birds mourn their unborn

twisters swirl

nest graveyards ‘neath fallen trees

birds mourn their unborn

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  1. Date: 11/17/2012 10:02:00 AM
    A sad haiku from you Carolyn.I can visualise the image.

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 12:54:00 PM
    A nice haiku Carolyn thanks so much for your comment on Chloe.~LUV~Teresa

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 2:55:00 PM
    a sad and mournful sight & sound. Light 7 Love

  1. Date: 1/26/2011 8:02:00 PM
    Hi Carolyn. This is one of my all time favorite haiku. I love the whole poem; from beginning to end. Congratulations on your winning placement. I will read this one again. Love, Deb

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 4:20:00 AM
    Congratulations Carolyn, for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 10:26:00 PM
    I was hoping this would be on the list. I love this kind of "real" haiku! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 5:25:00 PM
    wonderful haiku Carolyn, congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 2:45:00 PM
    sometimes, in safety, I'd like to see a twister! Congrad's LIght & Love

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 10:29:00 AM
    simply stunning, carolyn... HEADS UP for the great win! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 9:50:00 AM
    Beautiful job Carolyn on your worthy Haiku 7th place, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 8:56:00 AM
    Hi Carolyn - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 8:26:00 AM
    This tender hearted poem is a winner!! Hooray for you, Carolyn!! :) love, Carrie

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 6:22:00 PM
    So touching, a beautiful write. This is a sure winner as well. Thank you for your kind comments. Caryl

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 6:24:00 AM
    i love the strong undercurrent expression of sorrow gracefully woven in this piece, carolyn.. undaunting!... best winning wishes in the contest..:) hugggs, nette

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 6:06:00 AM
    Oh Carolyn. This is so perfect. Every line, every phrase is just wondrous. I love this. Thank you for taking time to read and comment on my writing. As always, your words give me great joy. Love, Deb

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 5:34:00 AM
    A sad scene, but you do it so beautifully.. All the best for the contest Carolyn.. love Wilma

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 7:39:00 PM
    Looks like a very good haiku for the contest.

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 7:38:00 PM
    This paints a sad picture with beautiful description, Carolyn. I really enjoyed this one! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 4:47:00 PM
    Such a sad realization dear Carolyn, and such a profoun Haiku dear poet. Reminds me of the black birds which were blown out of our tree this summer, and thank God the rangers came to rescue them and assured Noah and I that they would be cared for and released back to the wild ! TY for this uplifting write love ! much love, james

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 10:36:00 AM
    This is especially true in our bitter cold Michigan weather. The nests don't offer enough protection and the nests- high above - are empty. Love, Dave