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Birds and Bees

T he birds are singing merrily H ummers sipping happily E veryone is busy as can be. B irds nesting in the apple trees I n magnolia and in cherry trees R aising babies is the game D oing what comes naturally. S wallows nest on porch again. A ll the mamas on the nests N ow each male does what he does best D awdling and puffing up his chest. T rees are full of happy sound H unting treasures in the ground E nglish sparrows are around. B umble bees mid flowering trees E very flower is there to please E nter now a gentle breeze S ummer sweetness for the bees. Acrostic contest

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Date: 5/24/2013 7:25:00 PM
I love this Acoustic. Wonderful images conveyed. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/23/2013 10:50:00 PM
A very beautiful poem and image this is and a perfect acrostic poem of nature my dear friend Joyce. So love it and enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and BIG CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/22/2013 5:17:00 PM
Joyce, This is truly a textbook acrostic.. Masterfully structured and well deserving of a win.... Jake
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Date: 5/22/2013 12:58:00 PM
Wonderful, well constructed, congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/22/2013 9:11:00 AM
Nothing better than the birds and bees when it comes to nature, Joyce... CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA
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Date: 4/22/2011 5:24:00 PM
What a sweet, happy poem, Joyce! Hope everything is going okay with you.
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:00:00 AM
Beautiful and spot on the daddy bird Joyce. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Another contest coming soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 7:40:00 AM
Really got a laugh thinking of the papa birds puffing their chests while the mama birds do all the work. Very cute poem, Joyce! Congratulations on your success in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this cute write Joyce.. love Wilma
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:19:00 PM
What a sweet poem this is dear friend. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:29:00 PM
Joyce, I can see that Carol went more for the "nature aspect" in her contest, which is what you did too. And a great job of it. Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:53:00 PM
You have some lovely imagery in this piece Joyce. Congratulatoins on your win!
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:45:00 PM
A wonderful piece well conceived , Joyce. Contratulations on the win.
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:43:00 PM
lovely poem, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/9/2010 5:58:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on your poem's seventh place! Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/9/2010 5:44:00 PM
Such a happy and cheerful poem and entry to the contest! No wonder it was in the top winning poems! Congratulations, Joyce!! :)
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Date: 9/9/2010 4:41:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your super win in Carol's contest with this stupendous write and wonderful victory tonight..enjoy my friend with luv..
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Date: 8/6/2010 6:11:00 PM
This is wonderful! Nicely done and best wishes in the contest :) Kris~
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Date: 8/6/2010 5:05:00 PM
perfect, should do great in the contest
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