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Birds -End Line Word Poem-

Birds -End Line Word Poem- At sunrise I saw the humming -Birds With excited wings they -Flew To abundant gardens -Where They found clusters of fragrant -Flowers That their groaning hungry bellies might -Have 'Nough to drown in with lip smacking - Honey. HONOURABLE MENTION Balveen Cheema August 9, 2015

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Date: 11/12/2015 11:35:00 AM
Balveen, very nice.
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Date: 11/5/2015 12:21:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/5/2015 7:09:00 PM
Skat, many thanks!
Date: 11/5/2015 11:44:00 AM
I really like this winner!!Congrats on your win..Sara
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/5/2015 7:10:00 PM
Thanks Sara! Glad you liked it!
Date: 11/4/2015 11:25:00 PM
Congrats on fine win Balveen with this superb write!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/5/2015 6:02:00 AM
Many thanks, Upma!
Date: 11/4/2015 2:56:00 PM
Nicely done Baleen, congrats!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/5/2015 6:02:00 AM
Edward, many thanks for your appreciation! Balveen
Date: 11/4/2015 12:32:00 PM
Just like honey...a sweet end line poem, Balveen! ~ Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/4/2015 12:37:00 PM
Thanks Paul for being so appreciative! Balveen
Date: 8/8/2015 4:19:00 PM
I thought your poem was cute. Thank you.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 8/8/2015 9:41:00 PM
Thanks Pam!

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