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Bird Watching

She is so lovely and sweet The sunny dress top shes wearing Has me enthralled - unholy thoughts Its over ten inches above the lovely knees Its v shaped collar barely covering temptations She has me so enchanted ensnared by her grace She has my heart going crazy thoughts uncoordinated I brace my self and ask for her cell number its obliged Obliged with a heartwarming smile am almost tempted To move in for the kill but i remember - unholy thoughts To desire her is human and emotional ties may be so subtle Yet they at times feel so right and the allure ever so tempting But they catch one with the speed of a bullet.. love is for birds Am bird watching and not hunting that's why am bidding my time CODE 254 LKN

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Date: 8/22/2015 3:13:00 PM
Hi Lewis, this is deep, interesting, how you are the one admiring....A very descriptive poem. I love every line... I would like to point this out if you don't mind. On the 8th line, I think you meant her no he. I might be wrong. (i make mistakes on my poems all the time) I enjoyed very much... SKAT
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Date: 8/24/2015 1:11:00 AM
Thanks Skat and yes its her thanks for noting and am delighted that you love this poem//blessings

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