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Bird Song

Blast it bird! Where are ye off to? Don’t ye know the day is through? Oh but I’ve a lovely song to sing, I must ere I do another thing. To the man in the garden who works with the hoe, He’s tired and lonely and his heart needs to grow. Then off to the widow who thinks of her lost mate, And meditates on the gorgeous sunset of late. It is my heartfelt, joyful duty for which I long, To comfort God’s people with my little song. Oh, well off you go then, Your song wins again.. Inspired by Francine Robert's contest 5/8/11

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Date: 5/16/2011 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest Robrt. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 8:05:00 AM
Aww... I wish the birds at my windowsill in the morning were so thoughtful! Loved reading this.
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Date: 5/14/2011 8:52:00 PM
really enjoyed this write, a good piece of poetry.
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Date: 5/14/2011 12:54:00 PM
Hey Robert, I was outside working in my garden wondering if these lil fellas would stop over and entertain me while I work up a sweat! To be comforted with the song of the birds is a free Itunes download from God! Loved reading your poetry this past week. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/13/2011 4:12:00 PM
A wonderful win Robert, thanks for sharing ,,, i think this bird song needs piano tunes... sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d.
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Date: 5/12/2011 2:37:00 AM
a blasting congrast to you, robert... miss your poems; got more??? huggs, nette
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Date: 5/11/2011 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2011 11:46:00 AM
Thanks for your comments, Rob. This was one of the best contests I've seen on the Soup. Did you read the first-place poem? I was laughing myself silly. It's time for you to post some new work. (hint) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/11/2011 8:40:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win, Robert : )
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Date: 5/11/2011 7:58:00 AM
Oh yes.....it is never too late to hear one more song....must not stop that little bird from singing!! :) Sweet poem!! Congratulations on this charming poem!
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of francine, Debbie
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:25:00 PM
Congrats Robert on your HM in Francine's contest my friend with this clever entry luv.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:20:00 PM
Nice job and congrats.
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:03:00 PM
Ye be in the winners' circle, Rob! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2011 7:53:00 PM
congrats on your HM in my contest Roberts, great job
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Date: 5/10/2011 7:37:00 PM
This was certainly gonna be a winner, Robt! I love the idea of your kind-hearted bird. He is thinking of others first. Lovely. Honoring your talent this day. Congrats, friend! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:16:00 AM
Robert, You have a missionary-minded bird in this write. Such a thotful and caring lil fella whose song is healing to the community. I think it's fabulous! Great creativity conveyed for this contest. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/9/2011 1:31:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Good luck..At night here now there are tree frogs, Whip-Poor-Wills, and Doves calling..Sometimes it is a little noisey..Sara
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Date: 5/9/2011 12:42:00 PM
You really had me laughing Robert. I read more than I have time to comment and just want you to know how much I enjoy your sense of humor. Good luck in the contest, Diane
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Date: 5/9/2011 11:41:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your innovative writing today Robert. Hope to be reading more of your poetry very soon. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 8:06:00 AM
What a lovely thought, Robert : )
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Date: 5/9/2011 6:45:00 AM
Lovely write Robert.. such lovely lilting lines .. the part of the gardner so lonely in his garden enjoying the song of the bird there.. God's creatures compliment our lives so well.. even a little song to comfort us .. enjoyed my friend with luv..
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Date: 5/9/2011 6:20:00 AM
You have well read the picture and worded so lyrically , Good luck in the contest, Robert
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Date: 5/8/2011 10:00:00 PM
You made a wonderfully lyrical poem from that picture. Lovely!
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Date: 5/8/2011 8:14:00 PM
Awesome, Robert! I loved it! What a great idea of writing from the bird view of his purpose! I'm inspired! Thanks for sharing and thanks for the comments on my poem today. You have soupmail. Caroline.
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