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Bird of Prey

Bird of prey will dive today, His quarry soon consumed From one mile high, Will catch it’s eye, So life goes on, resumed. Touch not the chick , Of eagle quick, Iron talons claw your face, Flashing feathers , Clawed and bit, Begone, it’s not your place. Our Aussie Eagle Hawk , Has a 6 foot span of wing, Carries off a lamb in spring, Old Rabbit sometimes feels the sting, And still he flies of course:) 31-july-11 john freeman Contest Name Pure Thoughts On Nature

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Date: 8/7/2011 7:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this creative work..Sara
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:29:00 PM
Don, Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 5:44:00 AM
Another great write. I enjoy your stories. Haven't done much with poetry soup of late. Reading it again does something to the heart. Hugsss
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win !!!!!!! I luv it!!!!!!
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:02:00 PM
Congrats DON on a stellar win ..a sweet victory for a stunning poem luv... my s.m. is still non functional ..but .. the rest of me is great luv..haha..
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:57:00 PM
cheery congrats on your splendid win,don! : ) huggs!
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Date: 7/31/2011 7:15:00 PM
To see an eagle soar take one with it. Wonderful verse with pictures for the mind.
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:00:00 PM
Great write mate! good luck on contest...good on you don I say....old Jack
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Date: 7/31/2011 7:39:00 AM
Watching thes awesome eagles just fills a fellow with awe. They command the skies with their searching eyes. Great poem Don. It ought to do well.
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Date: 7/31/2011 7:35:00 AM
well put together, very good poetry. i like this
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