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Bird of Paradise

purple, orange vibrant jungle flora -- bird of paradise *For Chris's Pseudo-Haiku contest

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Elaine George

Date: 7/7/2011 3:21:00 PM

Many congrats on your win, Carolyn. Great Haiku. Lainie

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 7/7/2011 2:08:00 PM

What a terrific read Carolyn I know I dont't always reply to your comment but I have Muscular Dystrophy and only can use one finger to type with but I do appreciate all your comments.Congrats on this 8th.place win and thanks for your kind congrats to me to.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/5/2011 4:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Chris's "Pseudo-Haiku" contest. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/3/2011 9:09:00 AM

Those birds of paradise sure are awesome, aren't they? Really liked this vivid write, Carolyn :D Congrats on your win and hugs! Happy 4th of July to you :D

Diane Locksley

Date: 7/3/2011 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Best to you, Diane

Kash Poet

Date: 7/3/2011 12:15:00 AM

Congrats Carolyn on your win...enjoyed this colourful Haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2011 9:53:00 PM

This is wonderful, CArolyn. I am picturing the exotic flowers and suddenly appears the bird that resembles them all! Did you see the darling movie Rio yet?It is colorful just like your poem here. Congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/2/2011 6:18:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of chris, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2011 5:25:00 PM

Beautiful flower..Enjoyed ..Congrats..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/2/2011 12:57:00 PM

AHHH now thats nice l loveit Carolyn.... Hope you are resting and feeling somewhat better... I would rather the poem for the contest be about one person, Iwant to feel what I felt in my life and poem...Love Michael

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2011 12:22:00 PM

burst of colors on your poetic canvas, carols... great choice , the bird of paradise to end this blooming piece.. winning's best to you! :) huggs, nette

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/2/2011 5:59:00 AM

cool. never thought of it this way. Nice perspective. A little jungle all in itself. nniiicccce!

Kash Poet

Date: 7/1/2011 7:52:00 AM

Very colourful and vibrant write here Carolyn....Hope you are better..do read my poems..no need to comment:)

Rick Parise

Date: 6/30/2011 8:19:00 PM

Howdy there my friend......I just found you as I was drifting down the stream of poetic song ~ Beautiful Haiku///nice cut...Breath taking birds of such awesome colors///You have a great eve. ~ God bless~^Rick (I love the color "Purple")

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/30/2011 7:40:00 PM

Write only shorter Poems to less strain yourself. I am not sending the soup mail to cut short the reading and please do not replies back. Just keeps only one feeling in your mind that you have to get well and normal soon. This would help you a lot with all the good wishes of your friends on PS. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/30/2011 7:34:00 PM

How lovely are the colors and the Birds of paradise. Absolutely a combination of beauty to watch and listened their songs. Beautiful write. Great write my friend. My good wishes for your lovely entry. Thanks so much for your kind and precious comments on my Poems. I wanted to send you a soup mail as I was worried about your health. Please do not take too much pain in writing and reading for the time being. There is no need to reply back. Your simple thanks would convey all your words. conti..