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March 13, 2021
        Inspired by "Flowers or Flowers In Imagism Form" poetry Contest 
                             Sponsor : Constance La France

 

 

The day you brought me a Bird of Paradise, a rare flower which imbibed sun’s blushing orange glow, and aquamarine blue from ocean’s bosom, erased the excruciating pains of our separation unfolding a symphony of colours, stayed and comforted me since then with satiny softness. The ebullient orange and blue petals with a tint of olive-green from the depth of the sea, where a dreamy mermaid weaves her crimson love... remind me of our tender days together with unrestrained laughter and pure joy. the blue elegant boat-like bract brings the memory of our doting parrot - lingering lilac memory she left... As if she left the glistening colours of her wings on the slender petals.... for me to gaze at the graceful beauty, so all the sorrows, all the sadnesses magically heal and evaporate.

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Date: 5/20/2024 4:07:00 PM
You picked a lovely flower, Mala! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 5/20/2024 4:28:00 PM
Dear Kim, Thank you. Your thoughtful comment gives me so much joy! I feel really humbled!
Date: 5/19/2024 6:05:00 AM
Mala, this is simply sublime! Warmest congratulations on your top win
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Date: 5/19/2024 7:08:00 AM
Dear Seeker, I feel over the moon with your comment. A comment like this inspires me to write many more poems - I am honoured and humbled. Thank you for being so kind and thoughtful.
Date: 5/16/2024 10:39:00 AM
Dear Mala! Congratulations on your first place win in Jay's contest. What a beautiful and very unique flower as the subject of this poem - a tropical flower of sheer delight! I love the blending of your floral description with vibrant imagery and your depth of emotions. Wonderfully written dear friend! Sending you blessings, hugs and much love.
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Date: 5/16/2024 10:44:00 AM
Dear Sam, Thank you so much for your ongoing support. I am truly over the moon with Jay's placement, this is very important to me for getting inspired to write. You, a gifted poet yourself, inspire me with your kind, encouraging and thoughtful words. Can't wait to wait to read yours. Love and Hugs ~
Date: 5/16/2024 9:37:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful "Bird of Paradise" write. I love this pretty flower/picture... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
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Date: 5/16/2024 10:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Paula. Really appreciate your ongoing support. Have a wonderful week...Love and Hugs ~
Date: 5/16/2024 9:32:00 AM
Thanks for listing your nice poem in my sponsored contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/16/2024 10:32:00 AM
Dear Poet, I am so glad I entered my poem in your contest! Honestly I feel like over the moon! Please continue to sponsor more contests like this to inspire us writing. Thank you so much, truly appreciate your placement. Best wishes ~ Mala
Date: 5/16/2024 12:17:00 AM
Wow.... so lovely! You have magically brought forth a riot of colors on the petals of the Bird of Paradise. "As if she left the glistening colours of her wings on the slender petals.... for me to gaze at the graceful beauty," ! A poem of great beauty. Congratulations on your top win, dear Mala.
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Date: 5/16/2024 10:35:00 AM
Dear Valsa, Honestly I am feeling over the moon. It is so important to be appreciated! Thank you for your ongoing support. You are right - we have the same kind of passions - art, nature, music, of course poetry. Love and Hugs, Dearest Friend.
Date: 5/23/2021 6:00:00 PM
Mala, congrats on your win with this colorfully descriptive write! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/12/2021 9:49:00 AM
Very beautifully written Mala! The last line 'a void gently whispers." has so much hidden meaning!!
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Date: 4/12/2021 10:26:00 AM
Thank you, Smita, for reading my poem - really appreciate. I am so glad you have noticed the underlying meaning in the last line. BW ~ Mala
Date: 3/19/2021 8:46:00 AM
Dear Mala, your golden pen spills with wistful beauty. Joy and sadness mingle in the rich imagery of this lovely and moving piece. Your shining artistry elevates my heart in the elegance of your emotional verse. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/19/2021 9:06:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. Really appreciate your thoughtful and inspiring comments. Love ~ Mala
Date: 3/16/2021 9:59:00 PM
Beautiful and sad at the same time. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 3/17/2021 6:41:00 AM
Thanks, Richard, for visiting my poem. Appreciate your thoughtful comment ~ Mala
Date: 3/16/2021 9:25:00 AM
Mala, congratulation on your win in my Imagism challenge on the theme of a flower or flowers with your emotional and wonderful poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/16/2021 9:35:00 AM
Thanks, Constance. Your themes are always interesting! Appreciate your comments ~ Mala
Date: 3/15/2021 9:24:00 PM
Hi Malabika, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful evening:-)Alexis
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Date: 3/16/2021 9:36:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis. Really appreciate your comments ~ Mala
Date: 3/15/2021 8:56:00 PM
Back with congratulations...This poem is worth of a revisit and a FAVE!!!
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Date: 3/16/2021 9:37:00 AM
Thanks, JCB. Your Fave!!! What an honour ~ Mala
Date: 3/15/2021 3:56:00 PM
Mala, you have expressed such deep emotions as you describe your experience with the bird of paradise. Wonderful metaphor and imagery. Wonderful blending of a multitude of elements! Congratulations on your win! Much love and many blessings. Sam
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Date: 3/15/2021 4:13:00 PM
Dear Sam, Thank you for the wonderful comments - your comments encourage me to write more. My inspiration for this poem was Ezra Pound's Imagist poetry, and I thought this flower is just what I wanted to write a story about. Love ~ Mala
Date: 3/15/2021 4:34:00 AM
What beautiful imagery Mala... 'The ebullient orange and blue petals... reminding of days of unrestrained laughter and joy... Loved it... Congrats on your win.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/15/2021 5:59:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anitha. The flower itself is beautiful! Love your inspiring comments ~ Mala
Date: 3/15/2021 3:56:00 AM
- A beautiful flower I have never seen before ... a deeply moving poem, Mala :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/15/2021 5:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. You made my day! I love this flower too! Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 3/14/2021 3:59:00 PM
That flower is so special. Lovely write Mala. BIG congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/14/2021 5:17:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay. Glad you read my poem. Yes, that flower is very special. I attempted to write a modern imagist poem following Ezra Pound's movement, with this special flower.
Date: 3/14/2021 3:12:00 PM
such a touching piece malabika, I have grown seeds but so far my plant has yet to flower but I live in hope:-) Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/14/2021 3:33:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I am so glad to hear about your plant! Appreciate your loving comments ~ Mala
Date: 3/14/2021 11:49:00 AM
This is filled with lovely imagery, a definite winner. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/14/2021 12:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren. An experiment with Imagism - glad you liked it ~ Mala
Date: 3/13/2021 8:33:00 PM
The sadness the joy are all there, Mala. truly a moving poem..Love it.
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Date: 3/14/2021 5:28:00 AM
Thank you, Harry. Appreciate your inspiring comments.
Date: 3/13/2021 4:16:00 PM
This is such a majestic piece of marvel! With just few words you were able to tell us a love story written in each petal of that bird of paradise flower..I am mesmerized by your short but powerful description! More to come!
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Date: 3/13/2021 4:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet. I am delighted that you have enjoyed my attempt at writing a short, modern, imagist poem. Love ~ Mala

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