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Binge Drinker

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Binge Drinker

A bottle held loosely in her palm,
she's so tried from partying all night long.
Her "friends" wrote cruse words on her face.
Behind her lips is the vodka's after taste.
Around her on the floor are red plastic cups.
Behind her someone lays in throw up. 
In the morning the party isn't as cool.
There's a mess everywhere and underwear in the pool.
When the ambulance takes your drunken friends away.
Almost in a second your buzz goes away.
And the Smirnoff that buried her down six feet;
all the sudden doesn't taste as sweet.
Now the party-goers all mourn in black
knowing they'll never get the best binge drinker back.

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  1. Date: 7/17/2010 2:59:00 PM
    to many stories end up this way,,partying is fun but can also be so dangerous,,,if not careful,,you show so much of your tenderness with your words,your lines flow so very well,,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 11:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Emily. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 7:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Emily. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 11:07:00 AM
    Many congratulations on having your poetry featured >> James

  1. Date: 1/21/2010 10:21:00 AM
    You are very talented. Keep up the good work!

  1. Date: 1/16/2010 5:30:00 PM
    Wow Em Your great. You should always keep writing i have told you this forever. Well I will see you in school tuesday.

  1. Date: 1/16/2010 10:30:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your fantastic poetry with us all here at PoetrySoup. Hope to see your poetry posted here for many years to come Emily. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 2:19:00 PM
    Hey, this is a very powerful message poem here! wish all binge drinkers could read it and GET it. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 11:09:00 AM
    Oh damn. im so sorry. imma partier too, i think id stop if that happened to me. after i cried for about 6 days. this is really good and strong. your tallented.