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Bilocation

Yoo-hoo! yes I’m here unaware Where are you, I’m somewhere too, Peekaboo! Who said that I don’t know It’s dark everywhere, Well that’s true So you’re elsewhere out of view, I guess so Yoo-hoo! Stop that It’s not me me neither I have no clue We could be anywhere or nowhere, or see through Peekaboo! Oh shoo! Not for contest

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Ink Empress

Date: 2/3/2024 12:02:00 PM

This made me smile! Good one. Hah. Brilliant how you’ve composed this fun poem. I was just reading about bilocation and science behind it and how it works today, and then to see you writ this made me laugh! Clever: pleasure reading your work

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/3/2024 12:11:00 PM

Thanks Ink! Was a fun one to write, as I have absolutely no idea about the science behind bilocation, apart from entangled particles, but I’m pretty sure that’s not what the Seeker wanted lol! Cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 2/3/2024 11:00:00 AM

Haha! Very light hearted :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/3/2024 11:34:00 AM

It’s certainly a step back for me Dilly, we need minds like yours to tap into Bilocation, so had a bit of fun, I know the Seeker doesn’t mind, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/3/2024 10:58:00 AM

I bet a child would giggle their little heads off if you read this to them.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/3/2024 11:31:00 AM

I hope so Anaya, I was a bit conflicted with the concept of bilocation, so had a bit of fun flailing around in the dark, cheers David

Silent One

Date: 2/3/2024 10:23:00 AM

Ha! This one made me smile..

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/3/2024 10:40:00 AM

Thank you S1, it certainly beats a boohoo!