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Billy's Boat

. Billy built a sandcastle Whilst playing on the beach, on top he placed his little flag, safe and out of reach. He wondered if around it some water he should pour? A castle out of sand he had never made before, his daddy took his bucket, whilst Billy took the spade, digging out a moat, the sandcastle took shape.,Daddy poured the water, Billy launched his paper boat, and delighted as he watched it sail around his castle moat. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/9/2008 12:28:00 PM
nice rhyming and theme. jhl
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Date: 12/8/2008 6:51:00 AM
What a lovely picture of father and sons bounding moments--The innocence and the purity of a young child, still standing within awe of the simple things in life~while standing near his hero, that never let's him down! "Beautiful Picture & Thought Here~Beautiful Julie!"~On we go---"Love, John!:)
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Date: 12/8/2008 6:49:00 AM
A darling little poem, and cute form too! Good job, Julie! Children would love this! ~ Carrie
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