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Billet-Doux

With concentration-knit-brow pose, She reads and holds the letter close, There's good news, her joyful smile shows, Rays of hope shine through the windows; In anticipation's mad throes, Left all household chores to compose a fitting reply in love rose, Passion has turned her quite verbose; Shares it with her sister who knows - "Do you think he'll like my plain prose? Or should I pen a verse that flows?" "Just let your heart speak, I suppose, he'll love you more, you're whom he chose." Finger on cheek, smitten soul glows, Billet-doux* breeze fervently blows, It reaches him, her kiss enclosed. *Billet-doux ~ a love letter Painting #1

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Date: 10/22/2023 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your fun write/story. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..........
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Date: 10/21/2023 3:18:00 PM
Namaste, Joanna! I'm glad to be back and be privileged to have read your wonderful delineated monorhyme of the o's sound! 'Tis a righteous 1st placement honor that your 'Billet-doux' has achieved, my friend. Aloha, William
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Date: 10/21/2023 8:19:00 AM
A wonderful poem.. Congratulations on your win,,
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Date: 10/20/2023 10:54:00 PM
Joanna, thank you for taking part in the contest and congratulations on your win. I love how you rhythmically made your poem flow. God bless you
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Date: 10/18/2023 6:38:00 AM
You gave voice and meaning to the photo. Well done, Jo.
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Date: 10/18/2023 1:29:00 AM
Incredibly romantic, a love card that says it all. Blessings.
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Date: 10/18/2023 12:02:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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