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Bike Night

It's a two-wheeled cruising machine -
alloy spokes, bent handlebars, 
custom seat and paint job...
yet, I get these very odd looks
and wild laughter when I pull my bike up
to an establishment that advertises:
"Tonight is bike night - Cheap beer."
Is it my biking shorts?
Is it my cleated shoes?
I know it can't be my custom machine...
everyone at the bike trail comments 
on how nice of a two-wheeler I have!
I've even gotten dates because of my bike!!
A man on his custom cruising machine
out to get a couple of cheap beers...
I just can't figure it out!!!

My Bicycle / Gwendolen Rix

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  1. Date: 4/27/2012 11:54:00 PM
    I see Deborah "got it" I guess there is a hidden meaning that I can't see!!!

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 11:53:00 PM
    hmmm, why not? It's still a bike, isn't it? This one is quite enjoyable. Me likes.

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 5:10:00 PM
    Sounds like a great ride George, who cares what anyone else thinks!

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 4:41:00 PM
    LMAO!!!George! I couldn't get half way through this delightfully written piece before it dawned on me what was about to hit me!!! LOL! I cracked up!! Wonderful allusions and illusions!! I love it! best wishes in the contest! big hugs,love deb and thanks for kindness and reading my work :)