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Big Surf Shall We Waltz

Big Surf Blue ocean waves waxing down surfboard out shine! Time to load up woody wagon make tracks. Checking out sandy beach big surf what a gas! Walk the board control waves. By: Eve Roper 6/13/2015
Contest Name: Shall We Waltz? Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Date: 6/18/2015 1:46:00 PM
Very much enjoyed your waltz wave, Eve...ideal for surfing! I love swimming, but never tried surfing, although went as far as water skiing. Congrats on your fine win! // paul
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Date: 6/18/2015 1:04:00 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/18/2015 1:42:00 PM
Thank you, Skat, hugs eve
Date: 6/17/2015 11:26:00 PM
big congrats. I take it you love to surf?
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/18/2015 1:41:00 PM
Andrea, I love the ocean also camping out and watch the boats come in, but I don't surf I cannot even swim I sink. I was motivated to write this piece because of the talk the talk walk the walk contest of the 1960's slang. Thank you so much for the congrats Hugs eve
Date: 6/17/2015 8:54:00 PM
Eve, congrats on your placement in my contest! This reminded me of a Frankie Avalon, Annette Funicello beach movie. Well done! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/17/2015 5:53:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
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Date: 6/14/2015 12:28:00 AM
Eve, I love the beach though I had been there only once.. =') love the active image you so present in your poem! Happy SUnday!~olive eloisa
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2015 6:03:00 PM
Thank you, Olive, for your inspiration you have blessed me with. Hugs Eve
Date: 6/13/2015 7:07:00 PM
Dancing along with you my friend. A delightful beachy scene and seaside melody.. A7..
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/13/2015 8:57:00 PM
Thank you, Robert, I enjoyed writing this peom. hugs Eve
Date: 6/13/2015 6:48:00 PM
the sea and dancing seem to be very popular themes for this contest Eve - lovely write - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/13/2015 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, I just got motivated over the 1960's slang. hugs Eve

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