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OK, I deviated a bit from the contest rules in the wording of the first line.  My technique for addressing the contest themes is to close my eyes and let the muse decide where she would like to go with the theme.  She leads me to write many poems that do not exactly fit into the contest rules while addressing the contest them.  Like the nice GPS lady I have learned to follow her direction.

Big Storm A’Comin’ “Big storm a’comin’” that’s what the old man said. A heavy quiet crept over the valley as if embracing a frightened child. No lullabies riffled through the muffled trees no rocking motion to engender sleepiness. Concern rose as heatedly as the sun shutters nailed shut in defiance of its light children running aimlessly mimicking their parents scurrying about chasing away the memory of the last time the old man said: “Big storm a’comin’”. 4/16/2016 submitted to – A Storm Is Brewing – Poetry Contest sponsor – Kelly Deschler

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Date: 4/16/2016 9:19:00 AM
Good entry John, good luck. Why is it always the old man that knows about bad weather? I'm old and I don't know when to come in out of a hail storm...
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Date: 4/16/2016 7:08:00 AM
LOVE your take on the theme John - yes I have to follow my muse too but I have learned to turn the GPS off - can't stand being lead up dark allies lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/16/2016 7:15:00 AM
YEAH, and I know there's a change in her voice when she says "RECALCULATING!!' for the third time.....

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