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Big Steps Burdensome

step with little legs all happy days gone away big steps burdensome sweet softy eyes tear Parents and family borne rare one today hears

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Date: 8/14/2013 2:59:00 PM

i like the contrast here of baby steps with big ones, BL. thanks for seeing my poems. Have a nice day!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/16/2013 3:37:00 AM

Many thanks for your comment, my friend. Loved always, bl

Date: 8/13/2013 2:41:00 PM

enjoyed these bl

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/14/2013 11:45:00 AM

Thanks my sweet friend. Always, bl

Date: 8/12/2013 4:03:00 PM

Hi BL this describes progress to a T well penned Shadow x smiles

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/14/2013 11:35:00 AM

Hi! my friend, thanks a lot for visiting my page and for giving comment on my write. Loved always, bl

Date: 8/11/2013 3:33:00 PM

Hi Bi; I always take baby steps, before I take a big one. Enjoyed your poem very much. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/12/2013 9:48:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your visit to my page and for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Date: 8/11/2013 1:15:00 PM

BL., little steps, is all it takes... enjoyed....LINDA

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/12/2013 9:47:00 AM

Many thanks for your beautiful comment, my friend. Loved always, bl

Date: 8/11/2013 11:44:00 AM

- Lovely bl. - - Have a enjoyable Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/12/2013 9:46:00 AM

Thanks a lot, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl