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Big Lemon Or Little Lime

Big Lemon or Little Lime Whether my poem is big lemon or little lime Good or bad hate taking any or much time And will end up going far out of my way To hear something you sadly had to say. Design of my poems all may be devious Comparing this one to and with the previous Turns out being boring and time consuming And likely overhead my next poem is looming. Total number of tempting poems grows on and on And when I write last one my life will be gone No matter where any of them are left behind Pronouns and articles are all easy to find. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran and Poet This is thanks to Terry Cooper's outstanding analysis and proclivity whatever that means.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/11/2015 8:28:00 AM
Whats happening here James Horn? Is someone hating on your poems?
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:01:00 PM
Funom, I have to admit I have not been using enough articles and pronouns and was being criticized for it. It is all my fault and I am trying to learn by it. I am really glad and thankful that you are reading my poems. Jim Horn
Date: 5/11/2015 5:30:00 AM
I don't blame you. I wouldn't either even though I wrote it. Andddd, I would never begin to try to rate it unless an insect and you want to try and Raid It. Jim Horn
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