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BIG IDEAS UNG!!!! Fire was the big idea Flaming Woolly Mammoth on a hot stick OHH!! The wheel was the big idea Woolly Mammoth are heavy Caves were the big idea Condos of cohabitation. Cave Drawings were the big idea Decorative stories Road Trips were the big idea Keep moving with the food Evolution was the big idea Creatively adapt to change Music was the big idea Drums and whistles and chants Dance was the big idea Moving in the fire’s glow Words were the big idea The poetry of survival Texting was the big idea Messages scratched on a wall Moving out was the big idea UNG!!! Take fire with you John G. Lawless 5/17/2015 SUBMITTED TO – WHAT’S THE BIG IDEA – Poetry Contest sponsor – Lyric Man

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Date: 5/28/2015 10:31:00 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
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Date: 5/27/2015 7:24:00 AM
Good Job John, Congrats
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Date: 5/25/2015 6:56:00 PM
Fantastic win!
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Date: 5/25/2015 5:50:00 PM
JOHN, CONGRATS ON YOUR BIG DEAL WIN. ALWAYS ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations, love Skat
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Date: 5/25/2015 12:37:00 PM
Hi Mr. Lawless...I enjoyed this trip back to the beginning of time (was expecting to read somethin' abt the cowboys in there ;-)...congrats on your win...rgds, 7habang
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Date: 5/25/2015 10:13:00 AM
great idea John...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/25/2015 9:24:00 AM
love the humourous approach John congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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