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Big Bang

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This is a "lento" composition following the indications of Lencio Rodriguez.
Notice the rhymes among the first words of each line and the original structure of the lento.

Universe was only a little sphere Adverse to the empty space around Converse to expand , for self adhere Inverse to produce light and sound. Exploded then in a blowing sudden Inverted quickly its very sticky nature Expanded energy in the space fallen Started of shiny stars the adventure.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 10:37:00 PM

MARIO, HOPE YOU ARE ENJOYING YOUR EASTER EVENING.... LINDA

Mario De Paz
Date: 4/6/2015 3:23:00 AM

I hope that you too enjoy these days

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/1/2014 3:19:00 PM

You take on the ambitious task of describing cosmological discoveries in verse. Very nice job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Mario De Paz
Date: 10/2/2014 9:08:00 AM

Thank you Matthew, big bang is fascinating because it happened in a fraction of a second breaking the mith of relativity!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/9/2014 12:11:00 AM

Mario, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Mario De Paz
Date: 10/2/2014 9:18:00 AM

Thank you, Linda. I am answering late because I was on vacation without internet, but I am following you and your well deserved success on this site!

Kira Price

Date: 2/6/2014 6:06:00 PM

I love the show The Big Bang Theory! and yep pretty much what they said happened lol

Mario De Paz
Date: 10/2/2014 9:30:00 AM

Dear Kira, thank you for coming. It is a pleasure to meet you and I shall visit you soon

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/9/2013 10:51:00 PM

Congratulations, Mario.... like the slight alliteration last line... xox..LINDA

Fatima Nusairat

Date: 11/9/2013 5:42:00 PM

Congratulation

Karen Anglesey

Date: 11/9/2013 12:27:00 PM

WOW... nice visuals and very creative. Congrats on the win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/9/2013 4:28:00 AM

Congrats on the win , Mario

Mario De Paz
Date: 11/9/2013 9:30:00 AM

Thank you, but I do not know what I won, maybe a contest, but I cannot find it on the site

Skat A

Date: 11/8/2013 8:58:00 PM

Mario, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~

Courtney Courtney

Date: 10/15/2013 2:17:00 AM

like the topic

Mario De Paz
Date: 10/15/2013 11:50:00 AM

Thank you for commenting. These verses come out from the suggestion of Lencio Rodriguez to compose a new form, the "lento" composition which has alterne rhymes and the first word of each verse rhymng with thw prwcwding every four verses.