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Big As a House

Since big as a house, she wasn’t appealing So there was no use in her concealing Her enormous gut Along with her butt That came with a basement, floor and a ceiling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/21/2023 4:54:00 PM
I think you are an honest poet. You do not play by politically correct rules, as I see it. That being said, I see this lim as about a house. Obesity kills people, so I won’t applaud it Nor the designers who keep making clothes like tents. I want long life for all. Panagiota
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Date: 6/21/2023 6:16:00 AM
LOL cute but not politically correct these days..
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Date: 6/20/2023 1:22:00 PM
instead of singing she's a brick house... we go with BIG house. haha
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Date: 6/20/2023 12:25:00 PM
David I hope it isnt human but an actual house lol. Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 6/19/2023 6:54:00 PM
Sounds like 'Big House' is a little backed up there! lol. What's up front by her, anyway?! (O.K. No answer necessary!) Top-drawer limerick there, David. Smiles, gw
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