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Biding Time

In the old days, the sting of the pavement Would cushion our bones while we ran We'd tread the water until the waves meant Nothing but curves and a pension plan The clock would watch our eyes shift From youthful mass to wrinkled mist While seas of green rattled our feet And blindness took hold of all we could see With ebullient eyes we searched for hope The grounds of ruin dictating all we spoke Could you read us through an hour glass, You'd say: Let us bleed onto our past Let the cold pin us to the wind Our words tear open before they can mend Let our dreams shape us at last Our failures subside, our dark memories lapse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/12/2016 10:30:00 AM
nice to see this one again KIM... Love LINDA
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Date: 3/9/2011 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Kim. Love Carol
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Date: 3/7/2011 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 12/9/2010 6:26:00 PM
Well, you simply can't just tease us with one great poem. MORE! MORE! MORE!
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Date: 12/9/2010 2:48:00 PM
Congrats kim on "Biding Time" being featured. Vince
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Date: 12/9/2010 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. I loved the line "the clock would watch..." Very clever. So often we hear about "watching the clock", it is an interesting perspective to turn that around. The whole poem has so much of life in it. I'm glad that you shared it today.
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Date: 12/9/2010 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your work being featured on homepage this week..Also, welcome to the soup family ...May you entertain us with many more excellent post about great topics..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Time takes its toll on humankind and animal alike..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations Kim on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:44:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kim. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/18/2010 4:25:00 PM
interesting write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:46:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight.. hope u will check out the contest scene offered to new members.. good luck with luv..
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