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Bid On My Love

Bid On My Love Give me unconditional love and I be your slave No harsh words till I reach my lonely grave Give me my own breathing space to engrave my niche Waltzing romance in our idyllic world sequinned for the rich Balveen Cheema December 1, 2015 Contest: Bid On My Love Sponsor: Tammy Reams

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/5/2015 9:31:00 AM

I read this late last night with a foggy brain. In reading it again it is quite beautiful and I believe you will find what you desire.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 10:13:00 AM

Awww Richard, you're so sweet to come back! Anyway, I'm touched by your gesture and belief! Hugs, Balveen

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/5/2015 1:23:00 AM

It is possible the highest bidder may be morally bankrupt. I hope the man with the richest heart is the successful suitor.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 3:09:00 AM

OMG Richard! That would be an anti-climax to my hopes of winning the richest heart!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/1/2015 2:06:00 PM

lovely write for the contest:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/2/2015 3:30:00 AM

Thanks Jan! Love, Balveen